Monday, April 1, 2019

Siobhan's story

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  1. Hi Siobhan,
    I really like the way you put a background as a blue, white and another shade of blue it reminds me of a ocean an I also like the way you put "On a lovely sunny day" It builds a picture in my mind. Maybe next time you shouldn't put "the end".And I also like the word "leaped,Dived,deep blue Its all so good!

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  2. hey girl you need to make your spelling buger please

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