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”I need backup I repeat I need backup!”Shouted spiderman into his ear piece.” And not those diamonds again they do nothing.”
Spiderman was trying to save a girl called susan who had been pushed off a skyscraper in the middle of New York.The skyscraper was 210 stories tall.
Susan had been at her work and suddenly a slimy,.green,huge monster had smashed through the wall and followed susan to the roof and pushed her off and now she was as slimy as can be.
”We will ring up The dog and see if she has anyone else”Said S.H.I.E.L.D”Hold on... here they come.''
”Are you gonna save me or not”shouted susan .”Wooooooooosh.”Hey where did you go”Shouted spiderman. ”Over here”said a voice.Spiderman turned around.
”Who are you?Asked Spiderman to the mysterious girl flying in front of him.”and where do you come from?”.Just then 4 more mysterious girls came up behind her.”We”said one of them “are girl power. ”Just then they came into the light.There flying before him were 5 beautiful girls in matching purple tights and long sleeve tops,over the top of their tops is a blue vest with the initials GP on them and they have a pink mask over top of their faces.”And we are here because you said you need backup oh where are our manners. My name is Ella.”sad one. ”And these are my friends Emma,Anya,Miah and Tiffany.”
Like a flash they zoomed down to the ground,dropped susan off and flow off into the sunset.
The next day spiderman was interviewed.” So how does it feel to not be able to save someone but a girl can”asked the reporter.Spiderman replied”Well it feels well umm well I don’t know?”.” What “replied the reporter in shock.”You don’t know.''”yep thats what I said.”
Back at their headquarters Girl power was watching the news whilst drinking some hot chocolate in there dressing gowns.”Wow that mission was so easy all we had to do was fly there grab susan put her back on the ground and fly back home how could spiderman not do that.He is more famous than us.”said Emma in one breathe .
Suddenly the news turned to a face.”Hi Mrs Thoms I means the dog”said Miah.”Hello girls great job last night and no one knows who you are all they know is that 5 girls saved susan and spiderman didn't .” ”I know it was so easy,”said Emma.”You all ways say that”said Anya.
“Girls we have good news and bad news, which one would you like to hear first.”
“The good news”they all said together.”Ok the good news is that we found out why spiderman couldn't save susan.The bad news is that you have to take your holidays off to find a supervillain called the slimmer.””Ok thanks dog.”said Tiffany.”Oh and girls by the end of the holidays you have to have a story on this.The whole class is”.”Ok and thanks again dog”said Ella sweetly.”Goodbye”.
”Goodbye well I will see you guys tomorrow we can start then and tonight lets try get some research and lots of sleep I can tell we will not be getting much this holidays.”said Ella.”Me 2,me 3,me 4,me 5.
”The next day the girls met up at there fav cafe Girl Power.”Ok so far we have the info that the slimmer lives in the sewers and want to make sewers appreciated as well as make them a number 1 holiday place.So the first place we need to go is the sewers.”
The girls got into their superhero suits and quietly went down the sewer.They had been walking for hours until Tiffany finally said that they had been walking in circles and then they saw him the slimmer. He was so big and green and of course slimy just how susan had described.”Hi slimer”said Emma
“Who are you”The slimmer said back in a deep voice”and what do you want.”
“We”said Anya”are girl power and we want to stop you from your plans to make this famous and a number one holiday destination.””So are you wanting to fight”said the slimmer”exactly”Ella said
To be continued...
