Welcome to our Ruru Learning Space Blog.
We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
Please leave us some comments about our learning experiences and work.
hi amber, i think you did a good gob with your paragraphs. you also did well with your punctuation at the end of your paragraphs. but must of all you just did a great job on everything.
Hi Amber, I like how you themed the background and the pictures to the story and how you described almost everything. Maybe next time you could reread what you have written and make sure everything makes sense. Other then that I really like your work! :) -Amelia
hi amber i liked how you described the treasure in the story
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DeleteHello amber i like how you included the emeralds next time don,t to so much writing next time. :0
ReplyDeletehi amber, i think you did a good gob with your paragraphs. you also did well with your punctuation at the end of your paragraphs. but must of all you just did a great job on everything.
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thanks Peter for commenting
DeleteHi Amber,
ReplyDeleteI like how you themed the background and the pictures to the story and how you described almost everything. Maybe next time you could reread what you have written and make sure everything makes sense. Other then that I really like your work!
:)
-Amelia