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We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
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Hi Bronte, I like the way you described the treasure, it makes a picture on my mind. Next time you could maybe add a picture of a treasure chest or like gems or water because these dog pictures doesn't really match anything about the Story. I would really love to read more of this!!
Hi Bronte, I like the way you described the togs as Carolina blue togs. Next time you should maybe make the background a lighter color or the text. I would like to read more of this because its really good.
hi bronte I like the way you said Carolina blue togs next time you could not put dogs at the bottom of the page as much as I love dogs it does not go with the story plz make a part two it would be fun to read more
Hi Bronte,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described the treasure, it makes a picture on my mind. Next time you could maybe add a picture of a treasure chest or like gems or water because these dog pictures doesn't really match anything about the Story.
I would really love to read more of this!!
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ReplyDeleteI know they have no reason to be there but still...
DeleteHi Bronte,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described the togs as Carolina blue togs.
Next time you should maybe make the background a lighter color or the text.
I would like to read more of this because its really good.
hi bronte I like the way you said Carolina blue togs
ReplyDeletenext time you could not put dogs at the bottom of the page as much as I love dogs it does not go with the story
plz make a part two it would be fun to read more
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