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We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
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Hello Cyan,I think you did a really amazing story.I really liked how you,said it was so bright it could blind someone.I wanted to ask did this take you a day,or was it easy.I think you had some amazing words in there.From Karaitiana.
Hi cyan your story was so cool.I was hooked on every word. Maybe next time you could tell me what was in the treasure.What did they do with the treasure? From Ella
hi cyan I like the way you describe how much it was worth and how you said it could make you blind next time you can describe about the togs or what here was wearing from madds
Hello Cyan,I think you did a really amazing story.I really liked how you,said it was so bright it could blind someone.I wanted to ask did this take you a day,or was it easy.I think you had some amazing words in there.From Karaitiana.
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ReplyDeleteYour sunken treasure story has a lot of adjectives and detail that is really good.Good Job
Hi cyan your story was so cool.I was hooked on every word. Maybe next time you could tell me what was in the treasure.What did they do with the treasure? From Ella
ReplyDeletehi cyan I like the way you describe how much it was worth and how you said it could make you blind next time you can describe
ReplyDeleteabout the togs or what here was wearing from madds
Hi Cyan,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you put lots of adjectives.Maybe next time you could put more pictures.But I love the way you said how much it costs.
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