Monday, April 1, 2019

Dylan G's story

4 comments:

  1. good job Dylan good detail in your story


    sadie

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  2. hi dylan
    I like the way you said shiny water it makes me want to read it more
    next time you could add more to the paragraphs
    I wish I could find sunken treasure.

    from shanaya

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  3. ;) good job! good detil dylan!!

    OLLIE

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  4. hey dylan i like the way you did the backround next time change colour

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