Tuesday, April 2, 2019

Ella's Treasure Story

5 comments:

  1. Hello Ella I really think you put a lot of effort into this story.I really liked the words you used.I just wanted to know what was the crown made out of?Maybe next time you could maybe make the font a bit bigger.From Karaitiana

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  2. i really like it. maybe put your pictures down a little bit because its kind of covering you work. but very very good job

    From Peter

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  3. Hello Ella i like your writing a lot i like your background the most next time don,t add the hi light behind the writing because it is hard to see OK from Sapphire

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  4. hi Ella i really like your work on your sunken treasure storey
    next time can you tell us how much it was worth

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  5. Hello Ella you put a lout of effort in the story i like the way you added a back round and the pictures

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