Tuesday, April 2, 2019

Karaitiana's Sunken Treasure Story

6 comments:

  1. Hi karaitiana great story.I love the describing words yoiu used and paragraphs .

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  2. Thank you Ella.I really really tired :]

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  3. Hi Karaitiana,
    I like the way you used lots of describing words,picture and the background it reminds me of the ocean.Maybe next time you should add more pictures.I like you way you used the word Spectacular.I also like you way you described the rubies,peals,coins and the tiara.
    From,Kezia

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  4. Thank you Kezia next time i do a paragragh i will do what you said:].From Karaitiana

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  5. hi karaitiana
    I like how added a lot of described writing in you story

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