Monday, April 1, 2019

Kezia's Sunken Treasure Story

4 comments:

  1. Hi Kezia,
    I really like the way you described the treasure and the pictures, the pictures makes your background look good. I also like the way you made your writing big so that people can read it. Next time you could probably describe the treasure more.
    I would really like to read more of your Sunken Treasure Story!!

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  2. Hi Kezia i like how you included the green sparkly emerald rings next time try to fit the writing in.

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  3. Hi Kezia.I really liked how you used your words.I really liked your pictures just how Eunize said.From Karaitiana

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  4. Hey Kezia
    I love your sunken treasure story your detail is amazing.
    Good Job

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