Welcome to our Ruru Learning Space Blog.
We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
Please leave us some comments about our learning experiences and work.
Hi its Bronte. I like your sunken treasure story so much! I think it is really good. I do think that you can put a bit more writing though. I still do think it is really good!
hi madds i like the way that you described how heavy the treasure chest was i also like the way you described that the money or gold or maybe jewels could blind someone it made me laugh when the story said bruce put On his pink flamingo togs and jumped into the cold water
hi madds it's me skyla I think the funniest part of your story was the first paragraph I can't believe you made it say that bruce put on flamingo ! LOL
goood job madds but what did they do at the end I want toknie more.
ReplyDeletehi. I think its a great story but i think you are missing a few full stops. but a great story:)
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thank you for the comment i will do it next time from madds:)
DeleteHi its Bronte.
ReplyDeleteI like your sunken treasure story so much! I think it is really good. I do think that you can put a bit more writing though.
I still do think it is really good!
hi madds i like the way that you described how heavy the treasure chest was i also like the way you described that the money or gold or maybe jewels could blind someone it made me laugh when the story said bruce put On his pink flamingo togs and jumped into the cold water
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Deletehi madds it's me skyla I think the funniest part of your story
ReplyDeletewas the first paragraph I can't believe you made it say that bruce put on flamingo ! LOL
thank you
DeleteYOUR SO COOL MADDS nice work :D
ReplyDeletethank you cyan i think you are cool and you did some nice work
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