Welcome to our Ruru Learning Space Blog.
We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
Please leave us some comments about our learning experiences and work.
HI Makarie I really like this story and it is cool that you used your 4 paragraphs. Now next time please be better for your stories because they are only 2 lines so next time make it BIGGER
i like this couse its my story
ReplyDeleteHi Makarie I really like the way u put this story in such a good Order
ReplyDeleteNext time u should delete the fullstop befor Bruce on paragraph 2
HI Makarie I really like this story and it is cool that you used your 4 paragraphs. Now next time please be better for your stories because they are only 2 lines so next time make it BIGGER
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ReplyDeletei like your story because of the diamond
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