Welcome to our Ruru Learning Space Blog.
We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
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Hey Peter, Aryan here! I really like that you put a picture of a treasure chest. Next time maybe you could proofread your story because I can see some mistakes like you could describe the place or what is the place is it a restaurant or is it a movie theater. I would love to read some more of your stories Peter.
Hi Peter I like your background how it fits in with the theme and your writing, it has lots of description in it. I love the picture. I would love to go diving in the sea and search for treasure, how about you? From Amber
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ReplyDeletehi peter i like how you dicribe their face. but i dont like your backround :)
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteWHAT IS THAT!!!
Deleteits cool (or at least i think it is because its mine)
ReplyDeleteHey Peter, Aryan here! I really like that you put a picture of a treasure chest. Next time maybe you could proofread your story because I can see some mistakes like you could describe the place or what is the place is it a restaurant or is it a movie theater. I would love to read some more of your stories Peter.
ReplyDeletepeter this is an amazing job! but please do better in the story it is cool but has 7 paragraphs you only had to have 4.
ReplyDeleteI don't care that I did 7 paragraphs
Deletesup peter kees here good job
ReplyDeleteHi Peter
ReplyDeleteI like your background how it fits in with the theme and your writing, it has lots of description in it.
I love the picture.
I would love to go diving in the sea and search for treasure, how about you?
From Amber
:D i really like it
ReplyDeletehi peter i love how you added so much detail in your writing
ReplyDeletei like it so much