Monday, April 1, 2019

Sapphire's Sunken Treasure Story

9 comments:

  1. hi sapphire
    I love how you have put lots of description in your paragraphs and put a decorated it so it looks cool and it fits in with the theme.
    maybe next time can you write a little bit more please.
    I would like to go and get sunken treasure how about you?
    From Amber

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  2. Hi Sapphire,
    I love the way you put "The amazing treasure", it makes a picture in my mind.
    Next time you could maybe add more adjectives to describe the treasure.
    This is really good work, I would love to see more.

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  3. hi sapphire i love that you Put in lots of detail next time you should write some more and add another picture but after all i love it
    from Liyah

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  4. Hi Sapphire
    I love the picture you added in.I also loved the words you used.This is an WONDERFUL story.
    From Karaitiana :)

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