Welcome to our Ruru Learning Space Blog.
We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
Please leave us some comments about our learning experiences and work.
Shanaya I really like the end sentence you included as that makes the story finish well. I also like the adjectives you used to describe the treasure. Next time you could delete the p1 p2 p3 because I know that you are using paragraphs. I would love to find some sunken treasure like this.
Hi Shanaya, I love the way you add a good background colour and the way you described the treasure so much.Next time you should add more adjectives to your story. I really want to read more of your Sunken Treasure story.
hi well done guys
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thanks note from story writer
ReplyDeleteShanaya I really like the end sentence you included as that makes the story finish well. I also like the adjectives you used to describe the treasure.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could delete the p1 p2 p3 because I know that you are using paragraphs.
I would love to find some sunken treasure like this.
:)
ReplyDeleteHi Shanaya,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you add a good background colour and the way you described the treasure so much.Next time you should add more adjectives to your story.
I really want to read more of your Sunken Treasure story.
good job Shanaya keep up the hard work i bet Cameron would like this good job :)
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