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Hi Karaitiana , I like the way you included a picture of a lady or man on a horse Next time you could maybe describe the horse or make tell the readers a specific color of brown for the horse like burnt sienna.
Hi Karaitiana I really love the way you describable the horses and how the day was maby next time you could get more images of what you were disgrabing
Hi Karaitiana, I like the way you described the setting and the horses. Maybe next time you could add more sentences to your conclusion. This really reminds me of me looking at horses. Great job!
i realy like the way you described the horses.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could describe the sand and background in the picture
Hi Karaitiana ,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you included a picture of a lady or man on a horse
Next time you could maybe describe the horse or make tell the readers a specific color of brown for the horse like burnt sienna.
Hi Karaitiana
ReplyDeleteI really love the way you describable the horses and how the day was
maby next time you could get more images of what you were disgrabing
Hi Karaitiana,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you described the horses and the beach
Maybe next time you could add more images and tell what color the horse is.
Hi Karaitiana,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described the setting and the horses.
Maybe next time you could add more sentences to your conclusion.
This really reminds me of me looking at horses.
Great job!
Hi karaitiana
ReplyDeleteI love your ending.I could picture it in my mind