Thursday, June 6, 2019

Kezia's Carnival Description

8 comments:

  1. Hi Kezia Truby here,

    I like how you used interesting in your story about the carnival.But I notice that your lollipop got in the way of your e, Thanks bye.

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  3. Hi Kezia,
    I like the way you put a lot of pictures that link with the story
    Maybe next time you could change the background to light colours.

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  4. Hi Kezia
    love the way you described everything
    maybe next time you could describe more

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  5. Hi Kezia
    I really love the pickcher you yowsd they all were so funny and cute
    maby next time you could describe the what the people looked like

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  6. Hi Kezia,
    I LOVED the words you used to describe everything and really I would love to go there.Maybe next time make your pictures smaller...But other than that I loved it.
    From:Karaitiana

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  7. Hey kezia
    I really liked how you added cool pictures and I love your ending

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  8. hi kezia i relly love how you made it colourful

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