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Monday, July 1, 2019
Tutoe's Story
Hi, please give me your feedback on the ending of my story.
Malo Tutoe What a great story. You have got clear orientation, problem and solution. We have been talking in Room 8 about the ending being back to normal, or the new normal', after the action. You have done this very well when you talk about eating and watching a movie. Well done!
hi tutoe is is me lawrence i like the way you put coler to the backround it made it soo cool. when i read this i remember i watch a movie called venom and it was just kinda like what is in the story next time i think you should add more writing so we can find out more.
Malo Tutoe
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story. You have got clear orientation, problem and solution. We have been talking in Room 8 about the ending being back to normal, or the new normal', after the action. You have done this very well when you talk about eating and watching a movie. Well done!
Nice tutoe colourful work nice story
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ReplyDeleteHi Ruru,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post. But you need to change the colours so I can read it.
hi tutoe
ReplyDeleteis is me lawrence
i like the way you put coler to the backround it made it soo cool.
when i read this i remember i watch a movie called venom and it was just kinda like what is in the story
next time i think you should add more writing so we can find out more.