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Friday, June 7, 2019
Levi's Description of the Space Station
Hi My name is Levi. Here is my description of the space station. Please tell me what you like and what I could add.
kia ora levi. Luke here from your cluster class room. This is very good blog post,I like how you included the joke about "the earth is flat". You are very descriptive in your witting.I think you could add when the astronauts get a interview with a news station and they say the earth is flat Thank you Luke.
I read your space station Description and it sound's like you add lots of your effort in this post.I liked how you use the word WHOOSH! on your third sentence.
Hi levi, I like your blog post on the space station. I also liked how you did some jokes in this blog post. I look forward to seeing more blog post from you.BYE Quaid(:
Hey Levi, I like the way you added a conclusion and I like the way you added lots of describing words. Maybe next time you could add some similes and some more adjectives. This reminds me of space! Nice job!
hi its peter from south hornby I really like your work you had really good word I think if you could have said in your writing how the ship landed mabye next time you could say how you felt
kia ora levi.
ReplyDeleteLuke here from your cluster class room.
This is very good blog post,I like how you included the joke about "the earth is flat". You are very descriptive in your witting.I think you could add when the astronauts get a interview with a news station and they say the earth is flat
Thank you Luke.
Hi Levi,it is me Sam from HornbyPrimary school
ReplyDeleteI read your space station Description and it sound's like you add lots of your effort in this post.I liked how you use the word WHOOSH! on your third sentence.
Hi levi,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post on the space station. I also liked how you did some jokes in this blog post. I look forward to seeing more blog post from you.BYE Quaid(:
hello levi i love your work and i really like when said whoosh
ReplyDeleteHi Levi
ReplyDeleteI like your work. it made me laugh when they held up a sign that said "The Earth Is Flat" LOL
By Jaden from wigram primary
Hi Levi
ReplyDeletelove the way you described everything.
Maybe nest time you could add more description about the ship and astronauts.
Hi levi,
ReplyDeleteI like the picture of the galaxy you put in
Maybe next time you could put more pictures in.
Hi Levi
ReplyDeletei like you work and it made me laugh when it said the earth is flat LOL it was so funny :D and the whoosh was good detail By Caleb
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ReplyDeleteHi levi its Nathan from wigram primary i liked that you added pictures and i love your background and keep up the work bye
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ReplyDeletehey levi it me dude i really like your space station description
ReplyDeleteHello Levi I like your work
ReplyDeletehey Levi its Michael i like where u wrote whoosh! it was amazing
ReplyDeleteHey Levi,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added a conclusion and I like the way you added lots of describing words.
Maybe next time you could add some similes and some more adjectives.
This reminds me of space!
Nice job!
hey levi
ReplyDeleteI love how you described the rocket also I love your conclusion
Good Job
hi
ReplyDeleteits peter from south hornby I really like your work you had really good word I think if you could have said in your writing how the ship landed mabye next time you could say how you felt