Sunday, May 19, 2019

Aveen's Te Kahu Park STory

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  1. Hi aveen. I love your describing words.I never would have thought of that. Maybe next time you could tell us how you felt at the end.What did you taste well you were running.From Ella

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    1. nice job Ella at your comment i like how you gave a positive comment sorry i am not at school ......

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  2. hey Aveen this is peter and I like how you say as green as emaralds

    I just wanted to say maybe next time you do a amazing story check your spelling and it would be even more amazing than it already is :D

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  3. Hi its Risha and i like how you made a Te kahu park story

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