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We are a class of motivated and excited bunch of Year 4,5 and 6 students! We are excited to share some of our learning with you.
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Kia ora Joshvaasri, it's Punui-o-toka here from South Hornby School. We like how you included the sentence 'I could hear the people cheering like a lion'. This made us imagine that the people were really loud like a Lions roar. Our class can relate to feeling proud and happy as they felt like this after they ran the School Cross Country last term. We think that next time you could add some more descriptive words (adjectives) to describe the muddy water. What do you think?
Kia ora Joshvaasri, it's Punui-o-toka here from South Hornby School. We like how you included the sentence 'I could hear the people cheering like a lion'. This made us imagine that the people were really loud like a Lions roar. Our class can relate to feeling proud and happy as they felt like this after they ran the School Cross Country last term. We think that next time you could add some more descriptive words (adjectives) to describe the muddy water. What do you think?
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