Sunday, May 19, 2019

Heidi's Te Kahu Park Story

4 comments:

  1. Hi Hiedi,

    This is Shadrach from Hornby Primary School. I have been scrolling down to Ruru's blog post and I saw your blog post. Because it caught my eyes, because of the beautiful colours.

    I also like all of your describing words that you put in your writing. But maybe next time you could put full stop. So when people read it people will not run out of breath.

    But anyways that is an outstanding blog post. See Yah!!!

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  2. hi Heidi I like the rainbow background you used and i like haw you waiting on it fed back you code have put same pikers on the side. from : Jessica

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  3. hi Heidi it's risha i love your Te kahu park work or story i like the way you coloured your back round bhy

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  4. Hi Heidi
    those beautiful colors caught my eyes I love them much.
    I also love your great descriptive words.
    maybe next time you could make it a little bit longer.
    from AMber

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