Wednesday, May 15, 2019

Tutoe's Te Kahu Park Story

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  1. hi Tutoe I like the way u have set your paragraphs and I really like how u have set it up

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  2. Hey Tutoe It's me Aryan, I really like the way how you have put in some description like you heard yourself pounding, I also like the way you have put in that you felt your leg was about to die. This time you should maybe check your pronunciation, and re-read to make sure it makes sense. This reminds me when I went to zones and did 1K or 2K and when I did the champions race in 2018.

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